Sunday, September 20, 2009

DO I CARE?

The sun doesn’t shine,
Nobody drinks wine,
The birds don’t tweet,
Because the rats all squeak.

The clouds all gather,
Merry men don’t jabber,
One each other they land blows,
The streams have stopped their flow.

Is it because of me?
I hope not,
Because the pain of guilt throbs,
Not from the outside,
But right from the inside.

Is it life that is such a bore?
My back feels a little sore.
When is it all going to end?
I hope it’s after I bend.

To what becomes of it,
I hope I know no single bit.
I can only lie to myself,
What nobody dares themselves,
That little do I care,
For what it might bare!

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

wow.....child like innocence at times and yet conveying some really thought provoking analogies, tenuous at times, but thought provoking nonetheless....lol

Especially. the last lines, so much pain, in really delicate lines..


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Devajyoti Ghosh a.K.a Dj said...

nice . great start.. keep 'em coming .. :-)

Krishnaprasad said...

i guess this is a 3 year old work.........dude!!!!

Harisankar said...

hahhahah!!!......aliyaa ur showin real BIG progress!!!....CONRATS uve gratuated from kindergarten!!...lkgil ethi!!!......aaakaashuu

asquare said...

@hari: dude this was my first attempt at rhymes...and this was meant to portray innocence...my innocence:D